5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第6节
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Sample：
In the picture； a young man is lying in bed and says to himself； “If I do nothing； I will make no mistakes。”
How ridiculous this statement is！ To err is human—who can avoid making mistakes all the time？ If we are careful and cautious enough； we can always learn from our mistakes and failures。 So when we meet the same problem for the second time； we can tackle it from another angle and by another approach。 After repeated attempts； we can reduce or even eliminate mistakes。
We can’t help thinking of the inaction of some government officials。 Their chief aim in their daily work is to make no mistakes。 Whenever emergency happens； they never take immediate action。 Instead； they always report it to his superior and ask him what can be done。 In many cases； time has been wasted and the best opportunities to make remedies have been lost。 If government officials cannot make decisions and take actions； why do we need them？
Like the government officials； people of other professions should also take on their responsibility to do what they are required to do without hesitation。 Mistakes are not a bad thing so long as we are determined to learn from them and make constant progress。
点评：
该文的结构安排非常精彩。第一段对图画进行描述，非常简洁。第二段共分五句，直接对图中人的观点进行批驳。第一句话使用感叹句，极言上述说法之荒谬。第二句引用谚语，说明“人非圣贤，孰能无过”。第三句话说，我们总是能从错误和失败中学到东西。第四句和第五句说我们在遇到同样的问题时，总是可以尝试不同的方法以减少甚至消灭错误。
第三段共分六句，以某些政府官员为例。第一句使用了常见的举例子的句型。第二句说明他们的主要目的是“但求无过”。第三句和第四句说紧急情况出现时，他们不采取紧急行动，而是汇报给上级。第五句说时间浪费了，最好的补救时机错过了。最后一句说，如果政府官员不能做决定、采取行动，我们要他们干什么呢？这一段将上述对道理的分析与当前社会生活中的现象结合起来，很有说服力。
最后一段有两句话，第一句说每个人都应负起责任，毫不犹豫地履行自己的职责。第二句说错误并不是坏事，只要我们从中学习便可以获得进步。
心得：
要想写好哲理性的文章，平时要养成思考的习惯。在行文过程中，先辨明道理，而后与时事相结合是个不错的选择。不要忘记最后给出有力的结论。
Direction 29
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 point out the serious consequences of this phenomenon；
3。 suggest possible solutions。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
该题谈论了是一个非常令人担忧的现象——许多学生沉迷于网络游戏和网上聊天。结构非常清晰，分为三个部分——描述图画，说明危害，提出解决办法。我们可按照提纲来构建我们的文章，将文章分成三段来写。
Sample：
In the net bar； those who are present are obviously all school children。 Different are the things they are doing on puters—some are playing games and some are chatting online； but the same are the expressions they wear before the puters—attentive and addicted。 It seems that they are so absorbed in the unreal world that they may not notice anything around them in the real world。
As is known to all； the addiction to net games and chat can do great harm to children。 First of all； it will affect their study by taking up a lot of time and energy。 Secondly； radiation from puters will harm their health； especially their eyes。 In addition； their indulging in the unreal world will have negative influence on their munication with people in the real world； and thus will hamper the development of their personality and mental health。
From my point of view； in order to solve this problem； the primary responsibility falls on parents； who are supposed to have more significant influence on the growth of children。 By improving mutual munication； they can establish a better relationship with the children； make them feel they are cared and understood； and reasonably direct their interests。 Next e teachers and schools； who； undoubtedly； play an important role in children’s education。 Besides teaching knowledge in class； they should help children develop various interests to fill their afterclass time； such as sports and scientific invention。 In my belief； the problem of children’s addiction in net games and chat can be solved through efficient munication and proper guidance。
点评：
文章的第一段是描述图画。共分三句话，第一句话说网吧里都是学生。第二句采用对比法，说不同的是有的打游戏，有的上网聊天，可相同的是都那样专注。第三句采用结果状语从句，充分描述了他们此时的状态。
第二段首句是段落的主题句。而后分三个方面来谈，第一点是影响学习；第二点是有害健康；第三点是对个人成长极为不利。
第三段分两个方面来说，即家长和教师，结构极为清晰。最后一句话是结论，是对前面两点（共四句话）的总结。
心得：
该文章是典型的“现象——后果——办法”模式的文章，通过分析图画和文章，我们可以迅速确定文章的结构和发展，这是非常重要的。
Direction 30
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1） describe the drawing，
2） give possible reasons for the phenomenon； and
3） suggest possible solutions for the problem。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
该文提纲可分为三个部分：描述图画；给出图画所表现的现象的原因；给出解决问题的办法。这是一种非常常见的文章模式。在提纲中直接给出主题的情况不多，如果没有给出，就应该在第一段或第二段开头明确地点出来。图画题一般有两种情况，一种是平铺直叙，直接写图画反映的问题或现象；一种是含义深刻，简洁的图画中蕴涵着深刻的道理。一般来说，后者的难度较高。这里属于前一种情况。
Sample：
In the picture； we can see clearly that two small children are showing off their father’s business cards。 One says proudly； “My father is the manager of his department。” And the other immediately laughs at him and utters； “Oh； that’s nothing。 My father is the CEO of a multinational corporation。”
The reasons why such a worrying phenomenon arises； in my belief； are as follows。 First； in the social transformation period； some people pay more and more attention to wealth and status； and link success to such superficial factors； thus making a destructive pact on children。 Second； today’s media； to some extent； have actually aggravated such an unfavorable situation。 In films and TV series a happy and ideal life is often depicted as a luxurious one； which will inevitably have an adverse effect on young people who are still not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong。 Third； teachers； on many occasions； have not done a satisfactory job。 The present education system sometimes attaches too much attention to the scores and grades of students and overlooks their personality development。
To change the present unfavorable situation all of us must make immediate and substantial efforts。 The government should try it best to create a social atmosphere in which people cherish diligence； conscience and simplicity。 Teachers and schools should make every effort to teach the students to grow up into responsible and enterprising citizens who are determined to contribute to the development of the munity； the nation and the whole world。 Parents should let students get in touch with the society； helping them know that a meaningful life is one that brings significance to others。 Only in this way can we hope to solve such a disturbing problem and ensure the brilliant future of our nation。
点评：
该文共分三段。第一段描述图画。一般说来，先描述图画，后点明主题的情形比较多——这样写重在归纳，比较重视逻辑和事物发展的内部联系。而本文首句即点明主题，即本文所述的现象——孩子吹嘘父亲职位、相互攀比的现象——这样写开门见山，非常有力度。
第二段写了该现象产生的原因。第一句话是段落的主题句，而后分社会、媒体和老师三个方面来说。
第三段写解决问题的办法，第一句话是主题句，之后分别写政府、老师和家长正确的做法。这里没有使用象first；second；third这样的连接词，但由于采用了平行的主语，仍达到了结构清晰的效果。最后一句话是结论句，使用了强势的倒装句，句中使用了连词and，前面写“解决问题”，正好与提纲相扣，后面写“保证国家的美好明天”，是升华的部分，请大家用心体会末句的写法。
心得：
第二段与第三段均分三点来写，其中两点严格呼应，另一点并未严格呼应（家长）。这是平行之间见变化的高级写法，即两点是显性呼应，一点是隐性呼应。
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Direction 21
Read the following story carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 retell the story briefly；
2。 interpret the meaning；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
题目：
Where are we going？
A boat docked in a tiny Mexican village。 An American tour
